Kinda repetative
So it sounds pretty good for awile, but it is just soo repetative, it gets boring fast. You need to use more variation in your music.
Kinda repetative
So it sounds pretty good for awile, but it is just soo repetative, it gets boring fast. You need to use more variation in your music.
That was suprisingly good
Pretty simple song, nice little melody. The choppy vocals actualy work pretty well. It's a bit scratchy though, and a bit short, sounds like half the song just got chopped off. It's pretty good though overal.
I like it
It's got a great rythem, and the effects are well done. Personaly I don't find the bass annoying at all, it's industrial so that type of bass is expected. A little bit of reverb might help though. Great song though.
Now thats more like it
Everything that was wrong with living hell was fixed here, this just flows so much better, and the guitar riffs are great. Love the beat, only thing I might improve on is a little more variation, possibly a breakdown mid way through. Great song though.
Very good
This was put together very well and with a few touch ups would be an amazing song. First off, bit too much distortion, second I think some guitar riffs would add alot to this. It's a great song regardless.
Now thats more like it
Love it, got the perfect rhythm and some really cool riffs in there. It's very powerful, the edits really helped alot, adding those extra effects did so much for this song. This is phenomenal.
Melodic and Beautiful
It took me awhile to think of something meaningful to say about this song. It's absolutely beautiful. The lyrics are meaningful and touching, they rhyme and have a beautiful melody to them, which the piano complements perfectly. It amazes me how your voice can cover the alto, tenner, and soprano parts. Amazing work with the voice over. Nothing to critique here, this song is perfect.
Not enough there
The bulk of it just some droning synths, did pick up a bit at the end but too little too late. And it's too short.
Well it is a Demo, but it probably sounds too little too late because it only loops once, and cuts off. I had to quickly add an ending so I could submit it. I wanted it to morph into a different genre. The rest of the song will be like the heavy guitar part once it's finished.
Thanks for your honesty!
~Darthfett
Repetative
It's not bad but their's not enough variation. Not enough in general too simplex.
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